Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Adding details

I am learning to add some detail to my story.

Whales


The big blue whale and I like whales. Whales suck krill and now he has a friend.

I think it is hard to add some detail to the story. I need to think for a long time until I can write. I like the part when I wrote about the big blue whale.

Root Words


It was bit hard to match the root words and their endings. Next time I might ask for help.