I am learning to add some detail to my story.
Whales
The
big blue whale and I like whales. Whales suck krill and now he has a friend.
I think it is hard to add some detail to the story. I need to think for a long time until I can write. I like the part when I wrote about the big blue whale.
2 comments:
I love the details in your story. We will keep working on adding more details.
I love Whales, I'd like to read your story about whales.
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