91 banana fruit valley
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13.3.2018
Dear Mum Dad,
I can hear twittering birds outside, whispering and I can see books everywhere. And I can see people reading quietly. I can smell pages that smell like rotten pear that looks squishy and books that smell like honey. I feel the pages so silky and smooth. I can see the books getting flipped over. I can see trees outside. They look prickly but they are not. I can see classes working and the classes look colourful.
were am I ?
from,
Harry
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Reflection:
We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses. I enjoyed thinking about were I was.
Something I found tricky was the typing. Next I will try to start my sentences differently.
2 comments:
Hi Harry,
I think you are in the school library when you wrote this. I thought maybe a bookshop, but you could see classes outside, and you were at school when you did this writing, so I guessed school library. I like the smell of books. Clever writing.
Love mum.
You have used interesting adjectives Harry!
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